2010-10-06 12:01:44Micahel Tobis... "Terse, honest or effective: pick any two."
doug_bostrom

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Some interesting thoughts on communications to a lay audience:

Thinking you've communicated

Includes a lovely example of burying the screaming behind jargon, from NASA.  

2010-10-06 12:14:59
nealjking

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Tobis seems to think "honest" means the same as loading your poor reader with a probability distribution on every fine detail. It doesn't have to be that way: A good communicator can be terse, honest AND effective, all at the same time. You just have to have a clear idea of whom you're trying to reach. Then focus on what's meaningful and important to them.

Tobis is too pessimistic.

2010-10-06 14:45:26
doug_bostrom

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Tobis' mood is subject to natural variability, heh! He's been musing on this general topic for quite a while; if you dig back through his posts there are quite a few thought-provoking nuggets, often packaged in pleasing turns of phrase.