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2012-03-13 01:29:59 | History of Climate Science, Part 1, V. 2 | |
Doc Snow Kevin McKinney kdmsooboy@comcast... 76.17.37.231 |
Further to feedback on the previous version, a reorganized and tightened version of the post on William Charles Wells. (Hyperlinked references to be added.) | |
2012-03-13 01:44:57 | ||
Alex C coultera@umich... 67.194.46.38 |
I think you meant to link to the preview? | |
2012-03-13 06:18:26 | ||
Doc Snow Kevin McKinney kdmsooboy@comcast... 76.17.37.231 |
Indeed I did, thank you, Alex! Another rookie error, now fixed. | |
2012-03-13 20:03:06 | ||
Glenn Tamblyn glenn@thefoodgallery.com... 144.137.75.63 |
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Luv it. Particularly the inclusion of Cyrano de Bergerac. The worlds first Science Fiction writer. | |
2012-03-14 02:51:15 | ||
Doc Snow Kevin McKinney kdmsooboy@comcast... 76.17.37.231 |
Glen, that's pretty much how I arrived at the shorter version. But inspired by your comment, I added literal 'chapter (really 'section') headings. I think those address your concern somewhat (as well as earlier comments on the longer version) by making explicit the organization, and helping the reader maintain focus on where the discussion is going. (If nothing else, they at least help break up the text blocks a bit!) Also: I've also added the hyperlinked references suggested. They've been checked and, in several cases, debugged. But please feel free to recheck any and all! | |
2012-03-14 15:20:26 | ||
dana1981 Dana Nuccitelli dana1981@yahoo... 71.137.110.129 |
It's still quite long, but that's okay. Looks good to me. Let me know when you're ready to publish and we'll put it in the rotation. | |
2012-03-14 16:32:15 | ||
Andy S skucea@telus... 209.121.15.232 |
Very good. My only suggestion is to reformat the subheadings to the SkS house style and, maybe, indent the longer quotes in a blockquote style. I look forward to the next one! | |
2012-03-15 07:12:55 | ||
Doc Snow Kevin McKinney kdmsooboy@comcast... 76.17.37.231 |
Andy's suggestions have been implemented (and a hat tip to Dan for assisting with the formatting.) I think it looks good! Thanks to all whose feedback improved this puppy. As far as I'm concerned, it's ready! | |
2012-03-15 09:38:52 | ||
Daniel Bailey Daniel Bailey yooper49855@hotmail... 97.83.150.37 |
Looks good! | |
2012-03-16 02:06:08 | ||
dana1981 Dana Nuccitelli dana1981@yahoo... 64.129.227.4 |
Will publish this tomorrow. | |
2012-03-16 03:57:55 | ||
Doc Snow Kevin McKinney kdmsooboy@comcast... 76.17.37.231 |
All a-twitter--though not a-Twitter! (No account.) Seriously, I'm stoked. |